Saturday, March 22, 2008

HATE HATE HATE

I don't have any decent ideas for a title so, i chose HATE HATE HATE.

Pretty much explains everything.

Idea of you, as perfect as two
as cruel as it's true
complicated  unsure

undivided like suicide
unjust un derived
one sided unkind

meaningless and pathetic
endless and poetic
a song that went wrong
tainted all combined

you're the one thing that went wrong
deceitful, illusive perfect
the profits all not worth it

the love i've learned to love
a love i cannot have
fly away like a dove
i set you free of all of the above

hours turns to days
days to months, months to years
after everything i feared
now you begin to disappear

out into the open blue
flyaway like truth be you
i'm no longer in-love with you
a tribute, a poem, my last song for you

farewell thy bitter end is sweet
farewell oh loathsome nights i weep
farewell thy hidden wound i keep
farewell beloved love I no longer seek

truth be told, our friendship lets keep
the heart that's mine is no longer yours to keep
one sided as it seemed, i know you'll never weep
i know you'll never care, though the cut you left is deep

sleep now, don't say a word
sleep a thousand year, sleep through all the fare
my heart is like no other else
you'll feel the lost, a promise that i keep

you'll weep, you'll fall, you'll feel the emptiness of the summer
my fears you will encounter until you cry and shatter

I am no longer here for you, i'll be gone to you
no more, enough, abrupt
farewell thy sweet summers mist.
farewell... farewell...

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farewell...

lol...




13 comments:

  1. "you'll weep, you'll fall, you'll feel the emptiness of the summer
    my fears you will encounter until you cry and shatter"

    I love these lines.

    Wonderfully penned. O:

    I'd love to hear this with some music accompanying it. ;)

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  2. i never thought of placing tune in it...

    you just gave me an idea... lol

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  3. YES! OMG. XD

    Let your creative juices flow! I wanna hear it as a song! <3~

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  4. sure... let the juicing begin!!!


    lol

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  5. ... omg. XD

    That sounded so wrong! HAHA! XD

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  6. I know...

    waht the heck was i thinking!? haha

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  7. LOL. It's okay. We're both high! XDD

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